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katatonic717
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Posts : 1507
Age : 124
Location : Aimlessly wandering the cybernetic void... Searching for a home...
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JustBarney
Posts : 382
Location : Somewhere, Someplace
Join date : 2010-03-14
|  Subject: Re: A presant for Doomlord Sat Sep 04, 2010 8:35 pm | |
| This comic's great, but since I'm a critical bastard, I noticed a couple of problems.
1. Doomlord's not a Blood Raven. However, that's all you had to work with, so I'm okay with it.
2. Fagsy's a girl, from what I know. | |
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katatonic717
—————————————— I AM A NAZI |===| THE SHAME OF MANKIND ——————————————
Posts : 1507
Age : 124
Location : Aimlessly wandering the cybernetic void... Searching for a home...
Join date : 2010-02-27
| | Subject: Re: A presant for Doomlord Sat Sep 04, 2010 8:39 pm | |
| - JustBarney wrote:
- This comic's great, but since I'm a critical bastard, I noticed a couple of problems.
1. Doomlord's not a Blood Raven. However, that's all you had to work with, so I'm okay with it.
2. Fagsy's a girl, from what I know. thanks man but to resolve your problems 1: I made the armor all gold and special, and I gave him a veteran's helmet. 2: I dont want to imply a girl (even fagsy) was brutally killed, I NEVER harm women physically, regardless of who they are, or in my stories.
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JustBarney
Posts : 382
Location : Somewhere, Someplace
Join date : 2010-03-14
| | Subject: Re: A presant for Doomlord Sat Sep 04, 2010 8:40 pm | |
| - katatonic717 wrote:
- JustBarney wrote:
- This comic's great, but since I'm a critical bastard, I noticed a couple of problems.
1. Doomlord's not a Blood Raven. However, that's all you had to work with, so I'm okay with it.
2. Fagsy's a girl, from what I know.
thanks man
but to resolve your problems
1: I made the armor all gold and special, and I gave him a veteran's helmet.
2: I dont want to imply a girl (even fagsy) with brutally killed, I NEVER women physically, regardless of who they are, or in my stories. Okay, that makes sense. I love it  | |
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Inquisitor Doomlord
Inquisitor of the Ordo Malleus
Posts : 4068
Age : 32
Location : On the battlefield.
Join date : 2009-09-26
| | Subject: Re: A presant for Doomlord Sun Sep 05, 2010 2:04 am | |
| Brilliant  I love it! | |
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Emild00d
Internet Fungus
Posts : 613
Location : Not here
Join date : 2010-07-27
| | Subject: Re: A presant for Doomlord Sun Sep 05, 2010 3:29 am | |
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TheCaptain943
I'm the Captain. End of story
Posts : 856
Age : 32
Location : Germany
Join date : 2010-07-14
| | Subject: Re: A presant for Doomlord Sun Sep 05, 2010 5:31 am | |
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TheNewCity
Posts : 3020
Location : IN HEEEEEEEELL
Join date : 2009-10-10
| | Subject: Re: A presant for Doomlord Sun Sep 05, 2010 9:24 am | |
| Haha, awesome stuff!
Happy birthday, Doom. | |
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TheFurryCleric
AGNMI Furry
Posts : 2162
Location : At the HQ of the operation.
Join date : 2009-09-26
| | Subject: Re: A presant for Doomlord Mon Sep 06, 2010 8:17 am | |
| Happy Bday doom, and nice comic kat  | |
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